- There are some spelling/grammar mistakes (enought, completly, happend, Seargent, gass) You should type a bit slow/learn grammar.
- I think Cpt. Garrison could be a bit more strict. He's a captain.
- You pick a good choice of animation, but in mission 2 when Cpt. Garrison said "take cover!", I don't think the animation is a good choice.
- Mission 3 is boring. You just scout and talk. You could add an ambush by the enemies. Make it intense alright?
- Overall, the missions are not so bad. But, it's not what I expected when I saw your video haha but I guess I was expecting too much.